编者按：2024年2月6日，为期一周的“清北特训营”进入第三天。在“高考英语作文”环节，通过个体自主写作，对子互评和小组遴选，全营推选出了“高快英语作文之星”：李悦，黄刚兰。今选其英语作文，后附指导教师赵丽芹的评语，以飨读友。

作文1：你所在的读书俱乐部上周五开展了一次读书交流活动，请给学校英文报写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：

1. 活动情况；

2. 个人感受。

李悦：A Reading Interaction Activity 

Last Friday witnessed a reading interaction activity held by Reading Club, which was meaningful and pleasant.

With the host announcing, the activity started. At the beginning, students shared the books we liked best with each other. Following that, we talked about the ways in how to read a book and understand the meanings it conveys. Finally, we ended up the activity with watching a video, which introduced the origin and development of the classical works.

By this activity, not only did we enrich our school life, but also harvested the precious knowledge of books.

评语：本文紧扣题意，行文流畅，过渡自然，内容全面，句型多样。同时，巧妙地使用了无灵主语，with的复合结构，非谓语，定语从句，倒装等高级表达。不失为一篇好文！

作文2：假定你是校英语广播站负责人李华，请写一则招新广告。内容包括：

1. 广播站现状；

2. 报名时间和地点；

3. 欢迎参加。

黄刚兰：You Are Wanted

Words fail to convey my intense excitement on keeping everyone informed that new members are needed in the English Broadcasting Station. Here come relevant details.

Priority should be given that our English Broadcasting Station is located in the fourth floor, where the breathtaking view will never fail to fascinate you. There are 13 students in our English Broadcasting Station and they will take turns to broadcast school news. Also of primary note is that it is everyone who is welcome to sign up for the station. If you are eager to join us, sign up prior to next Friday.

Eagerly anticipating your active participation.

           The English Broadcasting Station

评语：本文构思精巧，内容全面，高级句型运用自如，比如：完全倒装，部分倒装，从句，非谓语等，语言功底雄厚，读后让人久久难忘，是一片上乘的佳作！

责编：唐盛